connecting the dots by editing & writing erotica
Sabrina was curled on the bed, blanket pulled up over her so she could block out the sun. Her body still ruminated from what happened at the hotel between her and Drew. She did not know if Drew knew it was her, or if he really thought that she was a lookalike that he had […]
Sabrina wandered in the area of the hotel, but did not go in. She did not know if she was going to see Drew—he gave her his card like she was going to seek him out. She had no intention of doing so… …except there she was wandering outside like a prostitute. The prostitute that […]
Sabrina wore the wig back to Harry’s. When she left the hotel after Drew, she did not wear it because there were people who would know she was Nichy if they saw her. But in his apartment, she realized that Harry would not have any idea who Nichy was. When she walked into the livingroom, […]
It was an accident. Sabrina meant to call Jeanne. But she accidentally called Drew because she had been looking at his contact information on her phone, and she had hung up when she heard his voice. But he still called back. “Hello?” His accent filled the line, and she hung up because that was not […]
Was it all about the fantasy? Was nothing real for her? Sabrina waited at her and Harry’s favorite neighborhood bar. She had spent most of the day lost in fantasies about Drew, and how fire-filled it had been between them. She remembered arching in the bed when he went down on her, because his tongue […]
It was a bizarre twist, and it made Sabrina resent Carole even more for her confession of love. It was not that they were not going to be friends anymore, the two of them had been through far too much for that. But it was that she hated that Carole romanticized the dynamic between them. […]
I am pretty excited to go on with this story, but it occurred to me that it (definitely) might be confusing for some people to recognize that Nichy and Sabrina are the same person. So in the last few weeks, when Sabrina kept talking about her past life…this might not be as obvious to all […]
There was something about Carole… When the two women went out for lunch—when Gui had to go back to work and they went back to being American and British tourists, respectively—that was when Sabrina saw it plainly. “You are in love with Gui!” Sabrina exclaimed and clapped her hands, the recognition shocking her like electricity. […]